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The Waterfall

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Literature Text

A gasping breathe for air
Fills my lungs with water
A Blurry world is discovered
As the water carries me forth
My head breaks the surface
A scream calls forth
Onlookers watch in horror
As I'm pulled down again
The noises get louder
A pounding in the ears
Another gasping breathe
Much needed air enters
And then I am dropped
Hurtling through the air
Water rushing above
To be slammed against rocks
As the waterfall ends
Critque and comments would be most welcome.
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free-feather's avatar
wow....... disturbing....... but good.